Chapter Twelve
Ana
Christian spun me around then pulled me back into his chest.
With perfect posture and technique, he guided me across the dance floor. For someone so reserved and withdrawn, he was a very good dancer.
“I liked your speech.”
“Because it was short?” He bunched my dress together in his
fingertips.
I chuckled. “Because it was good.”
He held my hand as he swayed me from left to right. “I think
my speeches have gotten a lot better since you came into my life.”
“Really?” I asked. “I don’t remember helping you write
them.”
“No. But you inspire them.” He pulled me closer to him and eyed my lips like he wanted to kiss me. If so many eyes weren’t on us, he
probably would have.
The music ended and the charity event came to a close. It
was a three-hour event with food and wine, and I was tired of smiling like a
Stepford wife. People kept asking me what it was like to be married to the
infamous Christian Grey. Instead of telling them off like I wanted to, I had to
give a rehearsed and political answer. I was eager to go home and spend the
evening with my husband while our children went to sleep.
“Ready to go home?” he asked.
“Definitely.”
The corner of his mouth rose in a smile. “Then let’s round
up the kids and say our goodbyes.”
***
Getting out of there was a nightmare. Everyone wanted to
stop and talk to Christian. And even more people wanted pictures with him. He
was always gracious and gave everyone exactly what they wanted. He hid his
unease so well I actually believed he was having a good time.
We finally made it to the entrance when we were stopped once again. A man in a suit walked up to Christian and asked him to follow him into the back. The director of the charity wanted a few final words.
My heels were killing me, and Phoebe started to feel heavy
in my arms. Teddy stayed by my side just as I asked, so at least he was
behaving himself. But I didn’t want to stand there for however long until
Christian returned.
Christian could tell I was uncomfortable. “Wait in the car.
Taylor is parked out front.”
I was grateful we didn’t have to stand there for another
twenty minutes. “Alright. Don’t take too long.”
“I won’t.” He gave me a kiss on the cheek before he walked
away.
“Let’s go home, guys. I’m exhausted.”
“I’m not tired,” Teddy said. “Just bored.”
We walked out the front doors and down the steps that led to
the street. Taylor’s black car was parked at the curb where it dropped us off.
I opened the back door and got inside with Phoebe and Teddy. After Phoebe was
buckled into her seat, the car pulled away from the curb.
“Taylor, wait. Christian will be right out.” How could he
forget Christian? Everyone had an off night, and perhaps Taylor was having his
first.
Silent, he kept driving.
Teddy looked out the window and didn’t realize anything was
off. Phoebe was asleep.
But I knew something wasn’t right. “Taylor?”
He stopped the car in the middle of the road and turned
around. A man I’d never seen before stared back at me with ruthless eyes. And
the barrel of a gun was pointed right at my face. It was pressed against the
seat and difficult to see unless you were looking right at it. “Do as I say.”
I stiffened in my seat and felt my heart pound. Fear gripped
me by the throat, and I could barely breathe. Teddy was directly in his line of
sight so I maneuvered my body in front of him just in case this psychopath
decided to shoot.
“Hand over your phone.”
I fished around in my purse and tossed it into the front seat.
“I don’t want to hurt you. But if you give me a reason to, I
will. Now sit back and be quiet.” He laid the gun on his thigh and faced
forward. He hit the gas and the car started to move again.
I wanted to scream.
Christian had no idea we were in danger. It would be at
least ten minutes before he figured out what happened. Unless the man who lured
him away was part of the plan. What if they were taking him somewhere else to
be snatched? What if our lives were going to end that very night?
I didn’t have time to panic or sob. I couldn’t save
Christian because I didn’t know where he was. But I had our two children that I
needed to protect even if it cost my own life.
And that’s when I remembered the pen.
Thank god.
I fished it out of my purse slowly so he wouldn’t notice my
movements. Thankfully, it was black and difficult to see. My thumb found the
groove along the side, and I hit the button just as Christian instructed me. I
hit it again just to make sure.
And then I hit it again.
***
Sitting inside that car felt like a lifetime inside of a few
minutes. We passed through the city and the traffic and headed toward the
coast. The shipping docks were coming into view, and I was growing more uneasy.
No one had come for me, so I had no idea if the pen was working. Was I hitting the button hard
enough?
I wanted to ask questions. I wanted to jab the pen into the
man’s neck and kill him then and there. But he would lose control of the car
and we might veer into oncoming traffic. I couldn’t risk the safety of Teddy and
Phoebe. All I could do was hope someone was coming for me or figure out a
way to stop him once the car was in park.
The man pulled onto a side street and headed toward an
abandoned warehouse. It looked twenty years old and run down. It
was creepy and strange, matching the situation perfectly.
“Mommy, where are we?”
I kept a brave face on for Teddy. If I didn’t, he would
panic. And if he panicked, that could get us killed. “We’re stopping for just a
second, and then we’ll be on our way home.”
Thankfully, Phoebe was sound asleep the entire time.
The man put the car in park. “Get out.”
My hands were shaking so much I couldn’t move.
He stepped out of the car first and shut the door. Then he
came to Phoebe’s side and opened the door.
“Touch either of my kids, and I’ll rip your face off.” I had
no right to make threats in that moment, but the second I saw him come near her,
I snapped. “Give me a second, and I'll get them out of the car. Back off.”
He continued to stand there, his eyes containing nothing but
pure evil. Then he reached out his hand to unbuckled her safety belt.
I grabbed his arm and bent his wrist the way Christian had
taught me. He could throw me around, but he sure as hell couldn’t
touch my kids. I sunk my teeth into his arm and bit him as hard as I
could.
“Ahh!” He stumbled back and gripped his arm. “You bitch!"
I unbuckled Phoebe’s safety belt and yanked her out of the
car seat. Once she was jerked, she started wailing.
“Mommy, what’s going on?” Teddy cowered against the door.
“Teddy, get out of the car,” I commanded. I shielded Phoebe
with my body just in case shots were fired.
The man pulled out his gun and aimed right at us. “What did
I tell you?”
Shots were fired, and I covered both Teddy and Phoebe with my
body, needing to protect them as my last dying act. I would never be able to
tell Christian I loved him again, but I would make sure my kids lived on. They
would experience life to the fullest, grow old and have kids of their own.
No one would take that away from them.
But I didn’t feel the burn of the bullets. I didn’t feel any
blood ooze out of my body. All I felt was my frantically beating heart going
strong.
When I finally found my courage, I turned around and saw my kidnapper
lying dead on the concrete. The gun was a foot away, and blood pooled
underneath his body. I was glad it was dark so I couldn’t see all the details.
The door next to Teddy opened, and a man wearing all black
grabbed Teddy. “She’s alright. She has two kids with her.” He picked up Teddy
and held him against his shoulder. “Mrs. Grey, are you alright?”
Oh thank god. They worked for Christian. “We’re okay.”
They helped me and Phoebe out of the car and made sure none
of us were hurt. The man kept holding Teddy as I cradled Phoebe in my arms. I
cried as I held her, so grateful nothing happened to either one of them.
“We have to keep moving.” He seemed to be the leader because he was giving all the orders. “Come with me.”
“Where are we going?” I asked.
“We need to get you to safety.” He opened the back door to
the SUV. “Come on, we need to keep moving.”
I followed orders because I didn’t know what else to do.
They just saved my life and knew exactly who I was. If I couldn’t trust them, I
didn’t know who I could trust.
***
They took us to an
abandoned meadow in the forest. An airstrip was there along with a medium sized plane.
“What’s going on?” I asked.
“We’re getting you out of here.”
“And taking me where?” I demanded. “What about Christian? Do
you have men looking for him? The last place he was seen was at that charity gala
in Seattle. Some man took him to the back but I think he was there to hurt him.
Did you send men to get him?”
“I don’t know what’s happening with him,” he answered. “Our
orders are to get you out of here.”
“And take us where?”
“I can’t tell you. But you’ll be safe.”
I was torn directly in half. I wanted to protect Teddy and
Phoebe, but I didn’t want to leave Christian behind. He probably had a plan to
get himself out of the situation, but what if I was wrong? “Did you call the
police?”
“Yes. It’s been done.”
I couldn’t leave Phoebe and Teddy with these men. They
seemed trustworthy but it was a chance I couldn’t risk.
They parked the SUV near the plane then escorted me out of
the car.
“I don’t know if I can do this,” I admitted.
“You have to.” He held Teddy’s hand and escorted him onto
the plane. The engine was already running. “These are the orders we’ve been
given. We need to keep you safe. Now go, Mrs. Grey.”
“But what about Christian?” I could barely talk over the
engines.
“Ma’am, you’re our priority. Let us get you to safety, and
then we’ll worry about him.”
Goddammit, Christian. We should both be the priority, not
just me.
He waited for me to walk inside so he could shut the door. “You’re
wasting time. The quicker you’re off the ground, the safer he’ll be. Now go.”
There was nothing else I could do, and while I wanted to
save Christian, the kids were my priority. I had to make sure they were safe
before I did anything rash. “Okay.” I walked onto the plane and listened to the
door shut behind me. I got Phoebe and Teddy into their seats and strapped them
in tight. The plane taxied to the runway and the engines roared to life. The
pandemonium matched the feelings in my heart. “Christian, please be safe.”
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ReplyDeleteBiting my nails until next Friday!🤐is Ana and the kids ok? Is Christian ok? Please hurry!!!!
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ReplyDeleteNew reader........hooked forever........is it Friday yet????
ReplyDeleteThose chapters are amazing please keep writing I have to know what happens. I have read the first 3 books at least 25 times if not more. I Love the Love that they have for each other. I believe the person doing all of this is the man from Italy. He was very interested in having Anastasia to himself. I know Christian trusts him but it is very obvious that he wants a piece of Anastasia for himself. I believe he planned all of this the minute they left Italy. Can't wait to find out. I also love the fact that you have wrote from both Anastasias an Christians point of view. So I'm very excited for more fan fiction. An I am patiently waiting for the 2nd movie to come out. I hope they stuck more to the book. An from what I have seen in the previews they are sticking to the book. Im a HUGE fan who would read your grocery list if you published it. Patiently waiting for the next Chapter.
ReplyDeleteI think it has something to do with that Colton guy!! I didn't like him from the get go! And how did the manuscript get on her desk, who put it there?? Nobody seems to know where it came from!!
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ReplyDeleteStill wanting t know if this is a cheat story. Several people have asked several times...I think it would ruin your brilliant story. Hope it's not coming with Crow. Maybe since she has Her kids with her it won't happen
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ReplyDeleteThis is very good! I'm glad I came across this! I cannot wait until this Friday! so do you post a chapter each week or do you post multiple?
ReplyDeleteOmg. I love the books. And I am loving reading this. I can't wait til friday. I dying to find out what's going to happen. Please keep them coming.
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ReplyDeleteFriday hurry up and get here, I don't want to wait for more! OMG I love this!!!! So thankful my daughter tagged me so I could read this!!!!!
ReplyDeleteFriday hurry up and get here, I don't want to wait for more! OMG I love this!!!! So thankful my daughter tagged me so I could read this!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOmg, hurry i need more...
ReplyDeleteOmg I hate wen it gets to the good bits then you have to wait for more 😢 It's now October 6th where's the rest of it
ReplyDeleteI need more!! I have my suspicions about the Colton guy … I don't trust him for a minute!!!
ReplyDeleteI got a bad feeling on him too!!
DeleteI'm dying!!! The 7th is tomorrow. I NEED to know what happens!
ReplyDeleteOmg please type faster i need to know whats next!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm dying!!! The 7th is tomorrow. I NEED to know what happens!
ReplyDeleteugh I just started reading all the chapters today! the suspense is killing me. Thank goodness tomorrow is the 7th :)
ReplyDeleteIt's the 7th in Australia... Come on I'm dying here and I need to know what happens? When Christian asked Crow to help them he said he could collect the debt another time.., is Ana going to be the debt? Or is Colton not really an author, but actually a bad guy, that's why money means nothing to him? ARGH I HAVE TO KNOW!!! And I need to go to work this will bother me all day. :(
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ReplyDeleteIn major need of more chapters please
ReplyDeleteSo glad that friday is tomorrow I'm checking as soon as I get up then on my break then on my way to dinner with the family can't wait to read more your stories are always an amazing read <3
ReplyDeleteUgh this is killing me!!! I have just reread the entire thing! Please keep writing! Where are the next chapters??? I love it!
ReplyDeleteHow long the suspense is kiling me x
ReplyDeleteWhen will the next instalment be coming it says today but not seeing anything yet 😭
ReplyDeleteOh hang on must be a different time zone to me as my comment says 2:44am i posted at 11:15 my time sorry didn't realise i was pestering so early lol
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ReplyDeleteFinally Friday but still have hrs to go, can't wait!!! 😳
ReplyDeleteDo you know what time the release is expected?
DeleteWoke up hoping to find the next chapter!!! Its killing me!!! You have us a hanging..lol!!!
ReplyDeleteWhere are they?? Im ready!!!
ReplyDeleteI keep checking lol I'm ready to read
ReplyDeleteOmg where is the next chaptersI'm dying over here to know what's going on with Ana and her family!!!
ReplyDeleteSo what time today will the chapters be on here? I'm so waiting to read nore
ReplyDeleteWhere are the new chapters? Love your writing :)
ReplyDeleteLove the story. When the new chapters coming out today?
ReplyDeleteOmg u can't leave it there I need more this has to be printed so it can go with my other books.
ReplyDeletePlease post more
ReplyDeleteMore more more. Got me hooked now! We need notifications or something
ReplyDeleteYes please post!!! Ahh!! It's the 7th
ReplyDeleteOn the edge of my seat waiting.....
ReplyDeleteNeeding more chapters, I've just sat and read all of these in one evening, I've fallen in love with this version, written exactly like E L James, very talented writer.
ReplyDeleteI can't, literally can't wait for more.
Definitely a collaboration with E L James as to rights and you should get this published.
Please release more chapters!!!
ReplyDeleteNext chapters please can't wait
ReplyDeleteWaiting.... please!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's now Saturday is the new book not coming out the waiting is killing me
ReplyDeleteThis waiting is torturing me.
ReplyDeleteI. Need. More. Now.
ReplyDeletePlease keep writing love it,need more.
ReplyDeletePlease keep writing love it,need more.
ReplyDeletePlease release the next chapter! It is killing me!
ReplyDeleteI'm like soooooo keen for next chapters!!! And for the new movie next year... Hope its posted soon... Anticipation is killing me
ReplyDeleteThe stress is killing me. I have to know!!
ReplyDeleteYour very talented!! I'm in love with your version of the continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy. You've made it your own, and I can definitely see Dakota as Ana the way you described her! Amazing! The story pickup where they left off, and has taken some unexpected twists. Since I found your book I haven't put it down, and now I've just finished the last chapter you've written.... The anticipation is killing me! It's now the 10th of October and still no new chapter 😢. Please work your amazing magic, and get us out of this torment!!!
ReplyDeleteSincerely,
A fan patiently waiting...
Krystal M.
Ok it's the 11th, I need more chapters please!!!
ReplyDeleteI HAVE TO WAIT????? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletePlease no more waiting!!!
ReplyDeleteOk you got me hooked, now where are the next chapters?
ReplyDeleteOh no!!! it's been almost 2 weeks!!! going thru withdrawals!!!
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